Tuesday, 26 August 2014

My mummy

My mum loves to crochet because its fun and it keeps her busy.
This picture is one of the blankets that she is making.
This one is a very pretty blanket that she has made so I hope its for me.
some blankets take her a couple of  weeks but if she was in a rush it would take her about 3 weeks and thats long.
And that is all I have to say about my mum 

by Hannah 





Monday, 18 August 2014

My goal fish

This is my goal fish that I made for my learning.

WALT: set SMART goals
Task: set a learning goal, a behaviour goal and an at home goal. Create a goal fish to display you goals.

Success Criteria
I can read my goals
My goals are specific
My goals are measurable
My goals are important to me

Reflection Questions

my learning

I  think
My learning partner thinks
I can read my 
goals
I can read my goals because I made my words nice and big.
yes because she made them nice and clear.
My goals are specific
Yes they are specific because I made them not so detailed.
yes because I think they are not to detailed.
My goals are measurable
They are not to hard for or to easy because because I made them just right.
yes because she made them not to hard and not to easy.
My goals are important to me
Yes my goals are import because they are something that I really want and need to work on.
I think they are important to her because she wants to complete them.
Hannah, you have thought hard about your goals and what you want to achieve. I can see that you are taking responsibility and picking goals that are important to you and you are working hard to achieve them. Soon it will be time to set new goals!
Kerri

Thursday, 14 August 2014

My awesome uncle

www.murse.co.nz

     
If you click on the little blue murse thing you will be abel to see my uncle. He is the man on the left.
My uncle is in Argentina with his girl friend. They are getting married there.I miss him so much.His name is Daniel but we call him Tio. This logo is the logo of his work because he works for murices.He is the best uncle in the whole world.He is coming back this christmas.He is going back after christmas for four years.That will be a long time so we skype him.It is really exciting.He wears grey glasses and he is bould .He thinks he is cool and awesome. He is young for his age because he is only twenty eight.He plays cricket with the boys and memory with me.He is a very fun uncle.Sadly we can not see him for four years after christmas.When he comes back for christmas I am going to make the most of my time with him.This is all I have to talk about my uncle but if you are lucky you might see him in the murse magazine.Bye

Beware of the rock

WALT: write to inform

Success Criteria
  • Create a clear image in the readers mind
  • Have a clear message (big idea)
  • Powerful words (precise, clear)
  • Reread writing and check for impact







I choose this piece to publish because...I thought it was the piece that I work the hardest on and the best on. 
I need to practise...Getting my words in the right order so it makes sense.
I am pleased about...That I got my work done in time and it made sense.


WALT: edit and publish our writing

Success Criteria
  • Use a font and colour that can be easily read
  • Must make sense
  • Correct spelling
  • Correct punctuation
  • Change at least 3 words to add impact for the reader
“Wait there mum I am just going to do something and I will be strate back” I say as I walk to the girls toliets.When I got there I saw that it wasn’t a big glamerance bathroom it was an old and most smellest bathroom I have ever seen and it wasn’t even a bathroom it was a little blue rectangle that didn’t even have a sink to wash your hands in.But it is what it is so I’m going to have to use it.So I try to hop onto the toliet but I am to short so I had to climb on.When I was finished I tried to hop down but I was to scared so I had to climb down to get to the ground and that wasn’t easy because I was only little.Luckily I got down form the there and started walking to the door when I was at the door to go outside to find mum I noticed that the big rock that was there before had been moved when I came in and for a little person like me I found that a little bit weird? I had my hand on the knob and it turns out that the door knob doesn’t work so I tried pushing the door but it wasn’t a door that you push on so I thought for a bit then I knew what to do I should shout for help so that is exsacly what I did.”Helpppppppp” I shout “I need help”as I bang on the door.Then I start to think that mum is wondering what I am up to.So I keep on screaming this “get me out of here”but then I heard footsteps coming near the door and they were getting louder and louder and closer and closer until I heared a vocie that sounded a lot like mummys that said “what are you doing in there” so I said “please open the door and don’t shut it”so she did.When mum opened the door I ran strate up to her and gave her a big huge and said “I love you” and all she said back was “I love you to”because there’s no better way of saying that.
You have painted a very clear picture about your experience in the toilet and how you were frightened. I love the language you have used and the way you have put your words together, like glamorous and how you said 'because there’s no better way of saying that'

Remember to check and to get a buddy to check your spelling and punctuation as you publish, also when publishing on a computer, there is 1 space after commas and full stop.
Kerri

Thursday, 7 August 2014

Kahoot


Task: use the ‘get it, sort it, use it’ model of inquiry to find out about the commonwealth games and share what we have learned.

WALT: use our prior knowledge to help us understand what we read.  (Get it)
  Summarise what we read to help us understand what we read.   (Get it and Sort it)
  use what we have learned from our reading. (Use it)

Success Criteria
ü 10 questions
ü Only one correct answer per question
ü Clear questions (not ambiguous)
ü Image matches the question
Reflection Questions

I followed the Get it, Sort it, Use it inquiry process by…Getting  what I know then putting what I have in the right order  then I can use it for my learning. 

My next step when I use the Get it, Sort it, Use it inquiry process is…That I can find more of what I know and research some of it so I have more  of the informaint in my work.

The fun part of the Get it, Sort it, Use it inquiry process was…Getting what I know and putting it in order because I knew a lot about the Commonwealth Games so I would have the right Question.

Hannah, you used your reading skills to quickly find information to use in your kahoot. You and your group, were able to sort the information into questions (and answers) and then to create a kahoot for the class try out.

You have thought and reflected carefully about your learning and how you used the inquiry cycle. Reflecting about your learning helps you to grow as a learner, to think about what was tricky and to set goals. Fantastic!
Kerri