Monday, 7 December 2015

Troys writing Presentation

Description: This term we have been doing poetic writing. This Presentation has got all of Troys writing Presentation. Mine is the 13th one on the list. My two are all about my puppy maggie....

Here it is...

Feedback/Feedforward: I think you did a good job on adding detail to your free verse next time you could add more detail on your cinqauin. - Zara

I learned that poetry does not always have to rhyme but when it does rhyme  it has 2 rhymes at the top and then 1 at the bottom so then there is on that does not rhyme in the middle.